Sunday, March 21, 2010

for a change of pace, this post is going to be three very old haiku's i wrote. they kind of go together. i don't really like them, except one. i guess i'm posting things that i know are bad because i don't want to look like a snobby jackass that thinks all his shit is good. i'm well aware i'm a growing writing and i want everybody to know that that's what i'm trying to do: grow. these are old, bad, and nothing to be proud of, but something to look back on. for those of you who don't know, a haiku is a small structural poem consisting of three lines, the first being 5 syllables, the second 7, and the last 5 again. here you go:

I. "flatter"

you once told me you
don't prize flattery; baby,
don't flatter yourself


II. "flattery"

was going to write
a(nother) poem for you, but
here's some half-assed hai-

III. "body language"

I would kiss you just
to shut us both up, let our
bodies have a talk


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